-Nitish N5
Everything in my mind,
Is a mystery,
Happiness, joy, sadness are just simple things,
I know nothing of what is deep within.
I always thought that I had angels in my soul,
Making me happy and good was their goal.
But I started to feel when I committed the sin,
That there is something else that my mind has deep within.
It makes me feel that I am somebody else,
It tells me to think of myself and nobody else,
My life is not to be wasted on lesser mortals,
Says it, I should strive to make myself immortal.
It tries to remove any compassion from me,
It strives to make my anger go free.
It aims to make me lust for more,
It works so that I have a conscience no more.
But it also brings the fire in my eyes,
It gives me determination to take on the world,
It makes my dreams go to infinity,
It ensures that my greed has no finity.
It gives me the reason for my existence,
For this I can give it no resistance.
Even the perfect man also has a bit,
Even the Creator wouldn't say there's no one without it.
It is the same thing the people have in their lives,
Which makes them determined to change other's lives.
It made sure Hitler never said sorry,
It got Mike Tyson to achieve world glory.
I know for sure that I'm nobody without it in me
For it is, The Satan In Me.
-Nitish N5
3 comments:
bloddy fuckin hell.... u can rhyme
i can digest ne trash as long as it rhymes
gud:)
impressive.. :)
u've kinda made use of Satan's negative energy to portray the achieving of glory and changing of others' lives..
energy inspires..whether good or bad, the energy to lust for more is the same..
u can see it in dedicated leaders to make the world a better place to live in..
u can also see the energy 'personified as satan' in osama bin laden to lead a large grp in causing terror..
in a finer detail, u can also see god and satan in the very same person depending on his attitudes and mood swings.. brilliant way to put it as a poem..
December 22, 2007 10:31 PM
unusual reason for u'r achievements:).A poem with a difference coz the normal ones ve ppl linking the good with the good..n good rhyming!
Post a Comment